COVERT -55 fiction

Deepak Karthik | Wednesday, February 22, 2012 | Best Blogger Tips



Should I propose her now? Can she hear? Her husband stands with her and so her kids, relatives.Should I spoil this ceremony? Why did I waste all these years?I’m doing it.
He had made his mind to let her know and walked towards her. 
By then the old Priest had closed her COFFIN.






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91 Comments:) so far. Teach me with your comments..

Uma Uthra on February 22, 2012 at 10:48 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

sooooooooooper 55 :) :) COFFIN ah??? kavunthiduchu plan :P :P sooper dooper :)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 22, 2012 at 10:50 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Uma UthraHEHE THANKS :D cute comment !

Abhinav on February 22, 2012 at 11:12 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Another nice post... :):):)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 22, 2012 at 11:14 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@AbhinavThanks a ton abhinav :D

Kajal on February 22, 2012 at 11:27 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

LOl.. you cracked me up on this:)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 22, 2012 at 11:31 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@KajalHaha Glad for that :) Thank you

CYNOSURE on February 23, 2012 at 12:06 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

awesome one deepak...seriously...I loved this one... :)

AKILA VENKAT on February 23, 2012 at 12:43 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

That was bloody intense! WOW!

Ranjana's craft blog on February 23, 2012 at 5:29 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Good one

Ashwini Dey on February 23, 2012 at 7:57 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Superb, bro . . . . You have proved that love never ends, it prevail even after death . . . .

~iyshu~ on February 23, 2012 at 8:13 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Good one Dee :)

vinay on February 23, 2012 at 8:25 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Awesome..your best 55 fiction till date. :) :)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:49 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@CYNOSUREThanks sarab :)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:49 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@AKILA VENKATThanks AKila, Keep visiting !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:49 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Ranjana's craft blogThank you JI

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:49 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Ashwini DeyThanks a ton Ashwini.. Keep visiting

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:50 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@~iyshu~Thanks Iysh !

Sanjana on February 23, 2012 at 9:50 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Intensity personified :)
Nice one Dee :D

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:53 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@SanjanaThank you SAnjana !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:54 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@vinayBRO :P thanks a ton... all for you to MAKE A MOVIE in future:D

Princess Poo on February 23, 2012 at 11:14 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Oh my god!! What a total turn of events.
I expected an Happy Ending and "wow".
Extremely good Dee :D ;).
Loved it <3

Rambling Of A Single Girl In The City on February 23, 2012 at 12:49 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is my first chance to read ur fiction.. When I was reading the first two lines I was shocked and was almost curious to know what happens next and coffin part really took me by surprise . I felt Oh no! in my heart.. good one ...

Divya on February 23, 2012 at 1:27 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Nice twist to the tale :-) You are becoming a pro with 55..

jaish_vats on February 23, 2012 at 3:10 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Wow!! That was a good one!!

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 4:28 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Princess PooTHANKS PRINCESS :D

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 4:29 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Rambling Of A Single Girl In The CityThank you so much
visit often :D

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 4:29 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Rambling Of A Single Girl In The CityThank you so much
visit often :D

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 4:29 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@DivyaThanks a ton :) a comment from you is spl :)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 4:30 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@jaish_vatsThank you so much :)

Smile :-) on February 23, 2012 at 5:05 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Sad.. But i was able to understand

saikat mbka ghosh on February 23, 2012 at 6:04 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

wow , that one was really touching bst uptil now, grt goin :)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 6:09 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Smile :-)Glad for that :) thank you :D

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 6:09 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@saikat mbka ghoshthanks saikat :D

subtlescribbler on February 23, 2012 at 8:08 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

awww...that was a good one! after reading urs..even i feel like writing a 55-er..been ages that i wrote one :D

sarah

indira on February 23, 2012 at 8:15 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

short and neatly written . will be remembered for long.

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 8:18 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@subtlescribbler u too write.. am addicted to it :D thanks for the visit !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 8:18 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@indiraThanks Indira JI !

Arnab Maity on February 23, 2012 at 9:11 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Woaaaaa...Awesome Dude!!!!!! I just had goosebumps reading the last line! Phenomenal :)

Ashwini C N on February 23, 2012 at 9:54 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Oh My God. That was wonderful. By far, your best I'd say :-)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:56 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Arnab MaityThanks a ton bro :)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 9:56 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Ashwini C Naha Thank you so much :D

Bikramjit on February 23, 2012 at 10:03 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

ooops too late thats why they say its better ot tell the person what you have in your heart .. so you dont have to repent thinking what could have been ..

lovely 55'r

Bikram's

Saru Singhal on February 23, 2012 at 10:53 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Love never dies...Nicely written Deepak:)

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 11:24 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Bikramjitthanks a ton bikram ji !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 11:25 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Saru SinghalThank you saru :D

Rayyan Rizwan on February 23, 2012 at 11:34 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

You are going great guns with this 55 fiction..

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 23, 2012 at 11:37 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Rayyan Rizwanwow, thanks rayyan :D

Jen..The Butterfly Effect on February 23, 2012 at 11:46 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

LOL! It's sad but why am I finding this funny? Deepak,I think you add a potion of funniness to every post of yours,invisibly! :P :)

Della on February 24, 2012 at 12:06 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

wicked!! i loved it !

Shamsud on February 24, 2012 at 12:38 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

smart write...intelligently done. thanks for sharing

deepbaazigar on February 24, 2012 at 3:17 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

In very few words you expressed so many things about true love ( i guess its love and not necrophilia :p)...Kudos !!!

D.Nambiar on February 24, 2012 at 6:02 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Too late. That's so sad.
What a coincidence, a few minutes ago I came across a quote on fb, that said -- If you love someone, tell them. Because hearts are often broken with words left unspoken. ~ Joyzamira Garza

Life Unordinary on February 24, 2012 at 7:33 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

profound? im not sure I understand the post :)

Vaish on February 24, 2012 at 8:02 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Lovely 55'er. Nice but sad twist at the end :(

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:12 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Jen..The Butterfly Effect LOL IS IT???? i never thought that a serious thing will go funny :D :D thanks Jen !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:13 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@DellaThanks Della :D

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:14 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Shamsud Thank you SHamsud ! keep visiting :D

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:14 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@deepbaazigarHEHE :D thanks bro !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@D.Nambiar wonderful.. coincidence :D thanks for the visit :D

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Life Unordinary ?? i can't get you JI.. you mean you don't understand it ?

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@VaishHAHA.. thanks for the visit and comment !

Rachna on February 24, 2012 at 9:30 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

The end was shocking. Good job with the story.

Haritha on February 24, 2012 at 10:29 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Ouch! that hurts! :( may be they are meant to be together in their next birth.. Good job Deepak! :)

Jerly on February 24, 2012 at 11:00 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Its really very true Deepak. Men wait and time flies by ...They forget that time is worth more and their fears..

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 11:11 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@RachnaThanks Rachna ji !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 11:11 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Harithaaha ! u finished it on a hopeful note :) thankssss a ton !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 11:12 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Jerlythanks jerly.. nice to see you back :D

SHANOJ K on February 24, 2012 at 11:17 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Nicely written :)

Meera Sundararajan on February 24, 2012 at 11:51 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

It is never too late - may be she will come out of the coffin after hearing the proposal

Vinita Kherdekar on February 24, 2012 at 2:00 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

nice one...took me by surprise :)

AmitAag on February 24, 2012 at 4:34 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Hey Deepak you're a Genius...man!!

Suchi on February 24, 2012 at 7:18 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Oh dear Dee...I initially thought the man was about to declare his love....:-) Awesome...

matheikal on February 24, 2012 at 8:46 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Quite a tragedy, Deepak. One wonders why love couldn't bloom earlier.

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:20 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@SHANOJ KThanks Shanoj !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:21 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Meera SundararajanRightly said !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:21 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Vinita KherdekarGlad for that.. Keep visiting !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:21 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@AmitAagKya amitaag JI.. genius ??? nahi ! THANKS FOR THE VISIT

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:22 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Suchihaha thanks suchi !

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 24, 2012 at 9:22 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@matheikalThanks uncle :D

MOHAN MANOHAR on February 25, 2012 at 1:28 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

nice layout and specially the muse gesture on yours blog been fantastic

DeEpAK KaRtHiK (420) on February 25, 2012 at 1:32 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@MOHAN MANOHARThank you so much !

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ on February 25, 2012 at 2:25 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

That's touching....Nice post :)

Neha Shandilya on February 25, 2012 at 5:14 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

good one.. :)

muddledup on February 25, 2012 at 6:32 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Black Irony!

Sowmya Swaminathan on February 26, 2012 at 11:21 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is one hell of an awesome post! You have really improved in this 55 fiction you know! Keep writing more stuff like this!:)

ankita lal on February 26, 2012 at 7:39 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

freakin' awesome!!!!!!!!

Mak on February 26, 2012 at 11:27 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Mind blowing! "can she hear"..."should i spoil this ceremony?" simply amazing Deepak. Following it.

Rajesh Asarpota on February 27, 2012 at 12:39 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Fantastic.. What a turnaround..

captainjohann on February 27, 2012 at 1:27 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Well it is the story of many of our youngsters of yesterday who did not have the guts to express their love and marry the person of the choice.Family, Responsibility to sisters, caste,religion are some of the cowardly excuses one used to offer.You have just so poetically captured this cowardice. Keep it up

Ashwini C N on March 1, 2012 at 3:16 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I had similar views and had tweeted about it. Human Rights commission always supports the wrong people for the wrong cause. They do not come to help a common man, but they come from some corner just when a police encounter a gang. I say the robbers deserved it, Despite whatever intention of the Police. Some times these Human Rights commission acts so stupid!

vineetchhajer on March 4, 2012 at 8:07 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

cynical eh??

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