GRATITUDE- 55 FICTION...




" Wealthy foreigner visited a temple, at the gates he saw a beggar with a stray dog, he took out the cash from his bag and donated it to beggar. For the dog he was feeding his biscuits, Minutes later beggar vanished with cash bag but the faithful dog walked behind foreigner to find that beggar… "


Gratitude is one of the greatest virtue and it means a lot to me, being a dog for a person who helped me to overcome my tough times is the least reciprocation that i can provide him back.
Humans lack this basic virtue, which dogs and other animals has it in abundance,
Pretty sad but damn true. people lacks gratitude...


According to me, a man without showing thankfulness  is a "dash".. i don't wanna compare an ingratitude person with any other word, it is a shame to that word not to that person...


P:S-This is my 2ND 55 fiction post(so called)and certainly not aimed to lure comments or votes but to convey a strong message to HUMANITY,"BE THANKFUL TO PEOPLE WHO HELPED YOU AT TIMES".Though i say it as FICTION, it happens and happened to me :D

64 comments:

  1. A 55 fiction with a moral. You are definitely a genius! Keep rocking!

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  2. @dellaGenius ?? too much for me della :) thanks for the comment, you said my prev post inspired you to write, i checked yours and got back that enthu :) so i wrote this :P THANKS

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  3. So true..I would have probably dragged it n made 500 words out of it :D but u explained it so well in 55 words, its a challenge..and a gr8 moral too.

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  4. @radsyeah even 500 will not be enough :( thanks for your regular comment rads, i owe you something :)

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  5. you have mastered this 55 Fiction writing...good one... :)

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  6. Wow.. another brilliant one Deepak. And it was an impactful and thought provoking story as well. All told in so few words. Too good. :)

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  7. Have a little faith on the humans my friend :-) That said nice one!

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  8. Well written within 55 words Karthik..keep it up !!!

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  9. Good one...a message out of 55 words, simply great. :) :)

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  10. Great work Karthik Sahib! Keep it up!!
    -amit

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  11. Superb work Deepak :).
    Your words are so true.
    Dogs are my most favorite animal.
    Their faithfulness and friendliness pleases beyond anything else.
    A Dog is a man's best friend ;) :D.

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  12. nice one bro. short and sweet message which precisely points out to the most lacking ability of a human being.

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  13. Another brilliant attempt with a nice message. Great going bro. :)

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  14. It is a very very nice attempt on your part but I'd suggest that you shouldn't expand your write-up beyond those 55 words.
    It eats away the magic of 55F.

    Brilliant piece this was :)

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  15. @Princess PooDogs are women's best friend too :P :D :D thanks pooh

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  16. @Seяendipity™glad to see some honest suggestion, will try to implement :) thanksss

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  17. so short and yet to touched an important fact. most of us lack gratitude. and it bugs me when people don't appreciate how much you've put in to help them out etc. sure,i didnt do it for the sake of a silly thanks. yet,hey! how can you be so mean and take me for granted??

    cheers buddy!

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  18. A good point made here Deepak, Gratitude is a quality that is becoming rarer by the day. Cheers for the 55 challenge! Well done :)

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  19. That's what beggars do.. their job is to look for money. He left the cash bag carelessly and expects the beggar to ignore it ??

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  20. @Rajawow wow wow, dude.. are you joking or serious ?
    If you are joking, IT WAS A JOKE OF THE CENTURY
    If you are serious, look for the word IGNORANT in dictionary...
    Thanks a ton for stopping by...

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  21. I'm very happy that you didn't misinterpret my comment. :)
    Waiting for your next 55F :)

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  22. gratitude in today's world?!?!? kinda getting EXTINCT :P its just that we gotta accept people the way they are :)

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  23. Dogs! Aren't they the best of creatures on earth? There really is a lot to learn from them.

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  24. And u put your message across very nicely.

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  25. @Seяendipity™WElcome and glad to see you checking my replies !

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  26. Very true, Deepak. Very well said.

    If we learn to live with gratitude, life will become a lot easier and we'll live with lesser desire.

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  27. SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPERB :) !!!! we need to learn gratitude from Animals who have learnt this art better than us :)

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  28. I am curious to know what you have placed at the place of that "DASH" if you have to?
    Well, a brilliant post, must say!

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  29. Brilliant Deepak ... you've written such a great lesson in just a few words ... god bless you !!

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  30. hope this one helps in people becoming a bit humane ..

    good one deepak.

    Bikram's

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  31. Ofcourse who said Fiction was just fiction!! Fiction is nothing but a fragment of our own selves and incidents that have occured in our lives :)!!

    Yes Gratitude is one of the greatest virtues of life!! :) nice post *Deeepak!!!:)

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  32. Good one! :)..I have never tried writing this, but it needs talent man..very good!

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  33. Hey! You've been tagged, check my blog :) Hoping you'll carry it forward :)

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  34. hey excellent piece ! welll i was inspired ! my scenario includes a phone call too.. check it out ? http://colouredbydreamz.blogspot.in/2012/02/55-fiction_17.html

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  35. Very True. In Times of good will people would think about others, but when times are bad, they refuse to think of others. Humanity, I wish, was prevalent as before. I guess you have become a pro in writing 55 Fiction :-)

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  36. well said! nice to read the truth!

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