Switched Off - (55 Fiction)



"" She was in a state of shock and ripped internally, "Number you have dialed is currently switched off"- an automated voice said, she dialed again with trembling fingers and pounding heart but NO sign of resurrection, “SAME REPLY”  from the other side, She turned towards the TV , FLASH NEWS flashed “SERIAL BLASTS AT BAZAAR” ""


Heya, 55 fiction it is a great style of publishing to buzz readers... There are plenty of bloggers who are good at this topic, this is my first ever attempt and i am pretty sure this is not a TYPICAL 55 fiction style of post, just tried... Don't be embarrassed :P
Cheers !

57 comments:

  1. Seriously? First try? :D Epic! Actually first time i ever came across this 55 fiction :P Nice one! :D

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  2. good writing....and theme of your blog also super

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  3. @Harshini am glad for that and thank you sooo much Harini !

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  4. well done from my side as i never tried but i will try it now

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  5. nice post
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  6. I'm learning new things today. I had never heard of "55 fiction" before(yes, m clueless most of d time). You did it quite well! I will be trying too :)

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  7. great!! loved it...inspires me to write one myself...

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  8. Certainly a very nice first attempt Deepak. According to me, 55 fiction is one of the toughest things to write. And you have done a great job here.

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  9. Actually, I was planning on writing a 55 Fiction as well :O :P ;).
    Even I have no idea how it is written :P But I like the way you have written.
    The style is epic.
    You do real great jobs on the first try itself Deepak :). Really love your enthusiasm and the humorous tone you've got in all your posts.
    I like reading your posts :). It never fails to make me smile.

    I'm really proud that I am your reader :).
    Keep spreading smiles :).
    Now for a different bye :P Hasta-La-Vista :D.
    Will come back soon :) without invitation B-).

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  10. Good one bro.
    I too had tried but ended up making 4 segments of 50 words into 1 complete story long back. Never tried since. :P

    http://insanemoviegeek.blogspot.in/2011/09/last-job.html

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  11. I don't know much about flash 55 but I liked this.

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  12. A real good one!
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  13. Really well written... it is a great 55 fic....

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  14. good one .. I have only tried this once ..
    Sad one though what all goes on a human mind in such times of turmoil

    Bikram's

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  15. 55 fiction??!! still clueless :P

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  16. hmm nice concept.....i too shud try this out thnx deepak for sharing this :)

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  17. @Princess PooCutest comment, sincerely i feel that you have misjudged me :( i am no great author and all :) but right from the heart THANK YOU SO MUCH for making me feel special :)

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  18. Very good :) Now you have given me the impetus to write my own.

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  19. interesting style...nice post Dee.

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  20. Wow. For a first timer, that is indeed a Great Attempt :-)

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  21. LOL! Great attempt! I wonder why all your posts make me Laugh!! :)

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  22. That's GOOD.
    You should do this more often.

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  23. its really hard to believe that this is your first attempt. every word of yours gripped me to the end... brilliant narration!!

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  25. Great work..though I have no clue as to what is 55 fiction.

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  26. Hey Deepak, this story is really nice...

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