TICK TICK(55 fiction)




Tick Tick… A tall man swiftly followed a short woman but she slowly advanced.
 It has been 59 minutes since they broke up, Reason- PUNCTUALITY.  
Seconds later as he hugged and merged him with her.
The Giant Clock gonged 12 times, soon after the 12th gong they departed.
Running for their next reunion (short)…Tick Tick…

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28 comments:

  1. Hmm!! Short and Sweet to be precise :D.
    Love it <3 ;)

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  2. short but sweet
    good fiction

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  3. How could anyone end up thinking this situation out!
    Brilliant!!
    Btw why cnat I see the date your post was published?

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  4. WOW...Quite an interesting thought and nicely written Deepak...:)

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  5. @Red HandedWill check that out :D thanks for notifying it !

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  6. i never would have guessed that this was about the clock's hands until the very last line. good one!

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  7. Very creative. Have never come accross anything like this ever before.

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  8. A very interesting and different story. :) Nicely told. You are becoming a 55 fiction expert dude. :)

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  9. A different say, portrayed very well. Loved it :-)

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  10. @Rajtoo much for me raj :D
    thank you so much...

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