RIP- 55 Fiction.

Deepak Karthik | Tuesday, March 20, 2012 | Best Blogger Tips

I can fly and got a weightless feel, I can see people rushing, kids with over-weighted school bags and full packed buses farting black clouds.
Wait…

I can see a familiar face lying unconscious.
Mute spectators all around his body. “Call an ambulance” I yelled.

As none heard…I said, Dear “Humanity” Rest in Peace
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73 Comments:) so far. Teach me with your comments..

CYNOSURE on March 20, 2012 at 7:22 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Stunned...It couldn't have been any better...beautiful message... :O

Ranjana's craft blog on March 20, 2012 at 8:10 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Excellent !

saikat mbka ghosh on March 20, 2012 at 8:20 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

sob sob......i knew it was in death bed ailing for ages..finally it passed away.....RIP HUMANITY.... :D,
as far as d post is concerned crisp and inspiring :)

Princess Poo on March 20, 2012 at 8:34 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Oh Well, Humanity is rested in piece these days.

Brought out the current situation. Very well written Dee :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 20, 2012 at 9:04 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@CYNOSUREThank you very much sarab :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 20, 2012 at 9:04 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Ranjana's craft blogThank you ji :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 20, 2012 at 9:05 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@saikat mbka ghoshThank you bro :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 20, 2012 at 9:05 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Princess PooThank you poo :) its happening

Uma Uthra on March 20, 2012 at 9:34 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

chooooooooooper 55 :) :) kutti and deathla oru alagu :) :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 20, 2012 at 9:47 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Uma UthraTHANK YOU SO MUCH UMA :)

Between life's doings on March 20, 2012 at 9:48 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

So, as I was saying :) I love how beautifully this slaps everyone and wakes them up. Atleast that's what it did to me. :-)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 20, 2012 at 9:50 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Between life's doings THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTING AGAIN :)
happy for that :)

Akshay Kumar G on March 20, 2012 at 9:57 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Started off slowly but the ending, brilliant. Very true but sad message.

Neha on March 20, 2012 at 11:09 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

awesome yaar :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 20, 2012 at 11:15 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Akshay Kumar Gyeah slow to fast :D
thanks akshay :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 20, 2012 at 11:15 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@NehaThanks Neha,, try soon :)

Sangeeta Reghu Nair on March 21, 2012 at 12:04 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Dee - Great one!! I share my feelings with Cynosure, it couldn't have been any better ..

Saru Singhal on March 21, 2012 at 7:32 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Very impressive and powerful...

Upasana on March 21, 2012 at 7:34 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Wow! Poignant! Beautiful point!

சேகர் on March 21, 2012 at 10:47 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

how could u include social things in your writing... its amazing..Each and every post which you are writing, its a message to all..keep going.....

vinay on March 21, 2012 at 10:47 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Wow...loved it. :) :)

Smile :-) on March 21, 2012 at 11:33 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

that was Amazing :) Love it

Ana_treek on March 21, 2012 at 11:39 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Very good..very very good :)

AmitAag on March 21, 2012 at 12:04 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

!! I have no suitable words for your excellence Dee..plz excuse me:)

Sonia on March 21, 2012 at 12:49 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Just splendid..

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:09 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Sangeeta Reghu NairThank you very very much ji :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:10 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Saru SinghalThank you so much Saru :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:10 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@UpasanaThanks Upsana :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:11 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@சேகர்Nandri nanba :) etho eluthurathu than... unga comment enna romba inspire paniduchu... thank you very much nanba !

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:11 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@vinayThanks Bro...

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:12 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Smile :-)haha :) thank you smile :D

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:12 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Ana_treekThanks Keerthana !

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:12 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@AmitAagWhat sire ? i am not even 1% of you :) thank you very much !

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 1:12 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@SoniaThank you so much SOnia :)

Gayathri on March 21, 2012 at 2:14 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

loved it... very thoughtful and thought provoking.. :)

Abhinav on March 21, 2012 at 2:25 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

It is a sad thing - the deteriorating humanity.. :( :(

Great message, well done Deepak :)

zradar on March 21, 2012 at 4:15 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

wow deepak this is such a great though conveyed in simple words...

Subhorup Dasgupta on March 21, 2012 at 5:48 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

To be honest (whenever someone says that, I realize that he means he has not been honest till now), I like your full bodied posts more than your fffs. These read like someone has tied Deepak to a post. Deepak unbound is much more fun. These feel like the new instant noodle single servings, same price, less quantity.

Nice one; you are getting to be really good at this too.

Shamsud on March 21, 2012 at 6:29 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

This is superb :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 7:20 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@GayathriThank you....

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 7:20 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@AbhinavThanks abhinav

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 7:20 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@zradarThanks chechi !

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 7:20 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Subhorup DasguptaLOL :) okies SUbh gotcha!

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 7:21 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Shamsudthanks

Jen..The Butterfly Effect on March 21, 2012 at 7:29 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

One word = WOW Deepak! Just WOW! :) You said that so damn right!

ritesh on March 21, 2012 at 10:08 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Excellent Deepak...brilliant, touchy n relevant

vidhya on March 21, 2012 at 10:51 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Wow!! that one was damn good deepak!! :) :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 11:06 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Jen..The Butterfly EffectThank you so much JEN

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 11:06 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@riteshThanks Ritesh :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 21, 2012 at 11:07 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@vidhyaThanks eruma

Mak on March 21, 2012 at 11:30 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thought-provoking post Deepak.

Kajal on March 22, 2012 at 12:03 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

very nice Deepak.. way to go!!

shilpi3005 on March 22, 2012 at 2:38 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Unique n so true. Loved it

Rambling Of A Single Girl In The City on March 22, 2012 at 9:03 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

yes humanity is dead long back.. Awesome and very impressive post

Raphael on March 22, 2012 at 10:59 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

how the hell do you do that? one heart-rending, eye-opener of a story in less than least words? wow..

and kudos for the work. you rock!

Haritha on March 22, 2012 at 11:01 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

How do you write it so effectively using so few words, I wonder. Beautiful! :)

Obsessivemom on March 22, 2012 at 11:29 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

That was well said.. crisp yet compelling.

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 22, 2012 at 11:47 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@MakThank you Mak:)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 22, 2012 at 11:47 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@KajalThanks KCN :D

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 22, 2012 at 11:48 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@shilpi3005Thanks a ton :)

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 22, 2012 at 11:48 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@Rambling Of A Single Girl In The CityTrue... its dead :) thank you

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 22, 2012 at 11:49 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@RaphaelThanks a ton Azra :) happy to see your comment... i don't find any greatness in writing such post :)
i appreciate your appreciation.

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 22, 2012 at 11:49 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@HarithaThank you Chechi :) glad to read your comment !

DeepaK KarthiK (420*) on March 22, 2012 at 11:49 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@ObsessivemomThanks a ton ji :)

Neeraj Kumar on March 22, 2012 at 3:07 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Deep thinking from Deep-ak.

Engram on March 22, 2012 at 7:25 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Nice one Deepak... and yes humanity is resting in pieces (not peace)..Lolzzz

theconfusedgraduate on March 23, 2012 at 1:28 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Wow...loved it :)

V. Khawani on March 23, 2012 at 5:38 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

so very true ! loved it !

Raj on March 24, 2012 at 1:50 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Your brilliance in 55 fiction is getting better and better. :) Way to go Deepak. Another strong message.

Ramakant Pradhan on March 24, 2012 at 2:52 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Thought provoking post!!

rahul aggarwal on March 24, 2012 at 11:49 AM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Woow Deepak!

Hard hitting truth indeed !

Madhu Mathi on March 24, 2012 at 1:37 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

That's a wonderful 55 fiction i've ever read!! I loved the way u explained the concept in such simple words! ^_^ Lovelyyy!

Ashwini C N on March 24, 2012 at 8:13 PM said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

That is exactly the situation now. Sad state. Very well written!

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