RIP- 55 Fiction.


I can fly and got a weightless feel, I can see people rushing, kids with over-weighted school bags and full packed buses farting black clouds.
Wait…

I can see a familiar face lying unconscious.
Mute spectators all around his body. “Call an ambulance” I yelled.

As none heard…I said, Dear “Humanity” Rest in Peace
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73 comments:

  1. Stunned...It couldn't have been any better...beautiful message... :O

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  2. sob sob......i knew it was in death bed ailing for ages..finally it passed away.....RIP HUMANITY.... :D,
    as far as d post is concerned crisp and inspiring :)

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  3. Oh Well, Humanity is rested in piece these days.

    Brought out the current situation. Very well written Dee :)

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  4. chooooooooooper 55 :) :) kutti and deathla oru alagu :) :)

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  5. So, as I was saying :) I love how beautifully this slaps everyone and wakes them up. Atleast that's what it did to me. :-)

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  6. @Between life's doings THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTING AGAIN :)
    happy for that :)

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  7. Started off slowly but the ending, brilliant. Very true but sad message.

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  8. Dee - Great one!! I share my feelings with Cynosure, it couldn't have been any better ..

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  9. Wow! Poignant! Beautiful point!

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  10. how could u include social things in your writing... its amazing..Each and every post which you are writing, its a message to all..keep going.....

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  11. !! I have no suitable words for your excellence Dee..plz excuse me:)

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  12. @சேகர்Nandri nanba :) etho eluthurathu than... unga comment enna romba inspire paniduchu... thank you very much nanba !

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  13. @AmitAagWhat sire ? i am not even 1% of you :) thank you very much !

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  14. loved it... very thoughtful and thought provoking.. :)

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  15. It is a sad thing - the deteriorating humanity.. :( :(

    Great message, well done Deepak :)

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  16. wow deepak this is such a great though conveyed in simple words...

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  17. To be honest (whenever someone says that, I realize that he means he has not been honest till now), I like your full bodied posts more than your fffs. These read like someone has tied Deepak to a post. Deepak unbound is much more fun. These feel like the new instant noodle single servings, same price, less quantity.

    Nice one; you are getting to be really good at this too.

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  18. One word = WOW Deepak! Just WOW! :) You said that so damn right!

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  19. Excellent Deepak...brilliant, touchy n relevant

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  20. Wow!! that one was damn good deepak!! :) :)

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  21. Thought-provoking post Deepak.

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  22. very nice Deepak.. way to go!!

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  23. yes humanity is dead long back.. Awesome and very impressive post

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  24. how the hell do you do that? one heart-rending, eye-opener of a story in less than least words? wow..

    and kudos for the work. you rock!

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  25. How do you write it so effectively using so few words, I wonder. Beautiful! :)

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  26. That was well said.. crisp yet compelling.

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  27. @RaphaelThanks a ton Azra :) happy to see your comment... i don't find any greatness in writing such post :)
    i appreciate your appreciation.

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  28. @HarithaThank you Chechi :) glad to read your comment !

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  29. Nice one Deepak... and yes humanity is resting in pieces (not peace)..Lolzzz

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  30. Your brilliance in 55 fiction is getting better and better. :) Way to go Deepak. Another strong message.

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  31. Woow Deepak!

    Hard hitting truth indeed !

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  32. That's a wonderful 55 fiction i've ever read!! I loved the way u explained the concept in such simple words! ^_^ Lovelyyy!

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  33. That is exactly the situation now. Sad state. Very well written!

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