I can fly and got a weightless feel, I can see people rushing, kids with over-weighted school bags and full packed buses farting black clouds.
Wait…
I can see a familiar face lying unconscious.
Mute spectators all around his body. “Call an ambulance” I yelled.
As none heard…I said, Dear “Humanity” Rest in Peace.
73 Comments:) so far. Teach me with your comments..
Stunned...It couldn't have been any better...beautiful message... :O
Excellent !
sob sob......i knew it was in death bed ailing for ages..finally it passed away.....RIP HUMANITY.... :D,
as far as d post is concerned crisp and inspiring :)
Oh Well, Humanity is rested in piece these days.
Brought out the current situation. Very well written Dee :)
@CYNOSUREThank you very much sarab :)
@Ranjana's craft blogThank you ji :)
@saikat mbka ghoshThank you bro :)
@Princess PooThank you poo :) its happening
chooooooooooper 55 :) :) kutti and deathla oru alagu :) :)
@Uma UthraTHANK YOU SO MUCH UMA :)
So, as I was saying :) I love how beautifully this slaps everyone and wakes them up. Atleast that's what it did to me. :-)
@Between life's doings THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTING AGAIN :)
happy for that :)
Started off slowly but the ending, brilliant. Very true but sad message.
awesome yaar :)
@Akshay Kumar Gyeah slow to fast :D
thanks akshay :)
@NehaThanks Neha,, try soon :)
Dee - Great one!! I share my feelings with Cynosure, it couldn't have been any better ..
Very impressive and powerful...
Wow! Poignant! Beautiful point!
how could u include social things in your writing... its amazing..Each and every post which you are writing, its a message to all..keep going.....
Wow...loved it. :) :)
that was Amazing :) Love it
Very good..very very good :)
!! I have no suitable words for your excellence Dee..plz excuse me:)
Just splendid..
@Sangeeta Reghu NairThank you very very much ji :)
@Saru SinghalThank you so much Saru :)
@UpasanaThanks Upsana :)
@சேகர்Nandri nanba :) etho eluthurathu than... unga comment enna romba inspire paniduchu... thank you very much nanba !
@vinayThanks Bro...
@Smile :-)haha :) thank you smile :D
@Ana_treekThanks Keerthana !
@AmitAagWhat sire ? i am not even 1% of you :) thank you very much !
@SoniaThank you so much SOnia :)
loved it... very thoughtful and thought provoking.. :)
It is a sad thing - the deteriorating humanity.. :( :(
Great message, well done Deepak :)
wow deepak this is such a great though conveyed in simple words...
To be honest (whenever someone says that, I realize that he means he has not been honest till now), I like your full bodied posts more than your fffs. These read like someone has tied Deepak to a post. Deepak unbound is much more fun. These feel like the new instant noodle single servings, same price, less quantity.
Nice one; you are getting to be really good at this too.
This is superb :)
@GayathriThank you....
@AbhinavThanks abhinav
@zradarThanks chechi !
@Subhorup DasguptaLOL :) okies SUbh gotcha!
@Shamsudthanks
One word = WOW Deepak! Just WOW! :) You said that so damn right!
Excellent Deepak...brilliant, touchy n relevant
Wow!! that one was damn good deepak!! :) :)
@Jen..The Butterfly EffectThank you so much JEN
@riteshThanks Ritesh :)
@vidhyaThanks eruma
Thought-provoking post Deepak.
very nice Deepak.. way to go!!
Unique n so true. Loved it
yes humanity is dead long back.. Awesome and very impressive post
how the hell do you do that? one heart-rending, eye-opener of a story in less than least words? wow..
and kudos for the work. you rock!
How do you write it so effectively using so few words, I wonder. Beautiful! :)
That was well said.. crisp yet compelling.
@MakThank you Mak:)
@KajalThanks KCN :D
@shilpi3005Thanks a ton :)
@Rambling Of A Single Girl In The CityTrue... its dead :) thank you
@RaphaelThanks a ton Azra :) happy to see your comment... i don't find any greatness in writing such post :)
i appreciate your appreciation.
@HarithaThank you Chechi :) glad to read your comment !
@ObsessivemomThanks a ton ji :)
Deep thinking from Deep-ak.
Nice one Deepak... and yes humanity is resting in pieces (not peace)..Lolzzz
Wow...loved it :)
so very true ! loved it !
Your brilliance in 55 fiction is getting better and better. :) Way to go Deepak. Another strong message.
Thought provoking post!!
Woow Deepak!
Hard hitting truth indeed !
That's a wonderful 55 fiction i've ever read!! I loved the way u explained the concept in such simple words! ^_^ Lovelyyy!
That is exactly the situation now. Sad state. Very well written!
Thanks a Ton for your words :) Keep visiting :)