Guess Me- 55 Fiction.


We lost our address and We wander all around the blue ground…
We have seen enough, we have seen people from Adam to Beti B,
but still we never jump up and down.
That’s why we are the examples for humbleness!

Remember…
IF WE DON’T CRY, YOU WILL DRY AND OBVIOUSLY YOUR WORLD WILL DIE.

GUESS ME :)

37 comments:

  1. Nicely written, the story of clouds in 55 words . . .

    Ashwini Dey

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  2. Nice choice of words, aptly used Dee! Clouds they are, right?

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  3. Dont know what it is..
    I am nit that clever...


    And hey you won the contest...

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  4. very nice choice of words deepak;

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  5. A nice welcome to expected clouds:) Another great one Dee:)

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  6. @Bhavanayou made me to think :D
    but answer is clouds !

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  7. Nice one, Deepak. 55 worder riddle, eh? Good concept.

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  8. ingenious , really a wonderful piece .... :)

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  9. We need them in this scorching heat Deepak...Very well put !!

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  10. Apart form the lovely words and creativity. This one gives our brains some work too. Clouds!! :)

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  11. Very interesting.. Adam to Beti - B... good expression! ;-)

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  12. great piece of writing...
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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  13. awesome !!! I am not sure I would have got the ans if i had not taken a look at the comments below ;) lovely !

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  14. Excellent-you have a way with words.BTW do you know you were the first one to comment on my first indivine post?

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  15. @indu chhibber @ all THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND WORDS :) enjoyed reading your comments :)

    @indu: thank you ji, i am not aware of that :P feeling good

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  16. That was wonderful. Loved the words "IF WE DON’T CRY, YOU WILL DRY AND OBVIOUSLY YOUR WORLD WILL DIE"

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  17. nice choice of wrds ... enigmatic
    THEY ARE CLOUDS WHO CAN CRY AND MAKE US DRY :)

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  18. I was clueless untill i read Alka's comment. :) the answer is clouds...
    Yes Dee..i did copy :)

    Good question...(nice way to appreciate a question to which we do not know the answer..corp world)

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  19. Wow! That was a unique thought. I would have never come up with such a powerful thought on a simple topic like that I think :) Good Job!

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  20. oh..u were writing about clouds..nicely done..

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  21. you write all genres? Awesome!

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