HACHIKO- A 77 FICTION


HACHIKO


There lived a loyal dog Hachiko with his humble master. 

Master feeds him his love as Hachiko repays with humane cuddles.

Decade passed, their bond went strong through the hearts.

Stroke murdered his master; Hachiko accompanied his lord for one last time.

As loveless hearts was busy booking their return tickets, loyal Hachiko waited for his lord’s return, forever...

Dog days are over & he found a pit next to his master's. 
Heaven awaits a beautiful relationship.













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P:S- Based on a true story, you can read about that here HACHIKO

37 comments:

  1. One of my favorite time-pass...reading your 55 fictions...superb one... :) :) :)

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  2. Hi

    Seriously some of the best acts of compassion and loyalty are non-human! Have you seen the movie Deepak? Nice post as always :)

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  3. @jaish_vats am downloading it ji :)
    thanks to you...
    wrote after reading your 55'ers...

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  4. nice,, i will try to see the movie..

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  5. Beautiful 77-Fiction.. Keep writing!

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  6. A true story is always difficult to pen. You did well~

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  7. Hachiko's story is one of my favourite stories. There isn't another creature on earth that can love like a dog, I swear.

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  8. ...wonderful Dee:) You're The Master of these!!

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  9. Loved it bro. Beautifully penned. Animals always shower unconditional love on us, but can't say the same thing about humans. Made me cry when I saw the movie on Hachiko. :(

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  10. It is traumatic to lose a dog. Well written.

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  11. Very beautiful... :)
    BTW, I can't access Indiblogger. It is not seen in the web. Do you know anyone having the same problem?

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  12. I just recently read the story of Hachiko. Touched me.
    Very well written. :)

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  13. Dog truly a man's best friend.very nice write up Deepak !!!

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  14. Mans best friend. The 4 legged creature never fails us.

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  15. :):) F-55 dedicated to pets who make our lives.

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  16. very touchy..liked it very much..

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  17. This is such a sad and touching story... I saw the movie, and it made me cry.

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  18. Though i am new on the blogging community,but as cynosure said,Your posts really give peace for sometime from hectic schedule,,,fulto time pass

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  19. Oh, this is truly beautiful...written in crisp prose with amazing compassion, Deepak !

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  20. Hachiko story is a real touching one...thanks for sharing

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  21. well written. Such a deep emotional story written so few words. Wonderful!

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  22. awww.. heart touching story :)

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