TWO MINUTES


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'


TWO MINUTES- 55 FICTION.


Busy bee roads,
Farting engines,
Obsessed  buses,
Scorching sun,
Sweating folks...

“BOOM”
An old man got smashed between wheels; few good hearts carried him to trauma centre.

Doctor- “I’m sorry, we could have saved him if you have made it bit earlier”
Folks- “But, sir this accident took place just TWO MINUTES ago!!!”
Doctor- “Awww…?”













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44 comments:

  1. Great take, Deepak. Clear, cool and moving script !

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  2. I laughed at the docs reaction! :-/ I am sorry, I am too cruel!lol

    ATB!

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  3. Different take on the topic.
    all the best:)

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  4. Hmmm...Poor Old Man!! Who do we blame ...the state of our roads or the state of our hospitals? A lot conveyed Deepak! Good Luck! :)

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  5. Great 55 post Deepak and liked your narration. All the best for BAT-29

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  6. That was short and crisp. Lot conveyed. Very well penned.

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  7. Lol, the doc's reaction is out of this world!

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  8. Hehe. Amazing that you could encapsulate a story in only a few words

    ATB

    Cheers
    CRD

    do visit mine

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  9. Very nice Deepak . . .

    A award is waiting for you. Check out here -
    http://liveuploud.blogspot.com/2012/07/something-awesome-and-sorry.html

    Ashwini

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  10. Good try.. Keep writing! All the best for BAT!

    Someone is Special

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  11. Very spontaneous, crisp, satirical yet comical write up Deepak. It does bring smile on the face despite that pathetic situation you've mentioned :)

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  12. Simple, short and ofcourse very funny. :-)

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  13. Good one. Really nice :)

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  14. The second line had me rolling on the floor :)

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  15. @all :) thank you very much :) thanks fro reading it patiently and expressing your views...
    keep doing it plz :)

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  16. great...
    www.rajnishonline.blogspot.com

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  17. Dont know whether to laugh or feel sad for the old man :P

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  18. Short and wonderful post All The Best Deepak

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  19. Yeah..it might be 'just 2 min', but it is also the minute diff btwn life and death!!

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  20. gud read , wen will u bring the 3rd part of the chennai girl story..wen wen uuuhhhhh...am waiting :D

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  21. Too good as always:) All the best Dee:)

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  22. how could have the accident taken 2 min earlier... and he was brought to the hospital immediately???? :) :D

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  23. 2 minutes can not just cook noodles, but could go to extent of someone loosing life too. I like your style of writing. Good one Deepak.

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  24. a sad but good story ! I realized that 2 minutes can have such an impact!

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  25. Time and Tide never waits for anyone...proved here :)

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  26. Precious moments.

    Karthik, have a look at my first try at 55.
    http://maks-journy-nevr-ends.blogspot.in/2012/06/intimacy-in-55-words.html

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  27. Took me twenty seconds to read...But it carries a thought worth twenty minutes of thinking.

    Takes me back to a road accident I recently encountered. Angers and frustrates me.

    HAppy blog-a-ton! Write what u think :) Cheers.

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  28. That is the reality. Everything needs to be have done two minutes ago at least!

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  29. A short one but a strong one!!

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  30. Good one, but I was expecting more from you! You've set very high expectations, specially in this genre :-)

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  31. That`s a rather harsh take but possibly true as well...

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