LIFE- A CYCLE (55 FICTION)


As School bell ranged, kids ramped like flash flood.
Feeble yet able grandma lifts her grandson and marches towards home.
Feeds her hand made food and sings a lullaby.

Grandma’s thoughts were interrupted as the nurse arrived to check her pulse.
Grandson stopped feeding grandma & lifts her from his lap;
LIFE- a “CYCLE”, TRUE.





17 comments:

  1. awesome is the word to describe this post dk :-) good work !!

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  2. Short but straight to the heart. Wow!

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  3. Flawless...here's how life comes full circle! Hope your grandma is doing well now...:-)

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  4. @Meoww yes, damn true... straight drive :) thank you very much...

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  5. Good thought, however the (dis)connect somewhat exists between the flow between the first three and last three lines.

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  6. Good, indeed its a complete cycle from birth -- > death

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  7. Life comes full circle.. always. Good read there.

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  8. Yeah...indeed a cycle..good one.

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  9. that was something a meaningful read :) :)

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